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naruto my way Ep. 1

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“Talking”
‘Thought’
{Kyuubi}

This story is about how I would have made naruto if I was the one who created it.

You could hear many things in konoha, but the one thing you could hear over everything else was the yelling of villagers. The villagers were chasing a boy around age 6 with blonde hair, and three marks on each side of his face making it look like he had whiskers. His name was Naruto Uzumaki, and he had the nine-tailed fox in him. He knew this, but he didn’t know why villages always chased him even when he was nice to them.

Naruto kept cutting corners trying to get away for the villagers, but it turns out that some of the villagers were actually a couple of chuunin.  While naruto was running he accidently tripped of a large ditch in the road.

“You’re dead demon kid” one of the chuunin said who was about to stab naruto with a kunai.

Naruto had his eyes shut waiting for the kunai to hit but he felt nothing. Naruto then opened his eye and sprung up when he realized where he was. He was at the konoha hot spring.

“H-how did I get here” naruto said out loud to him.

“I brought you here kid” a man said.

Naruto then turned around to see where the voice was coming from. The man in front had white hair wearing tan clothes underneath a red vest, and a large scroll on his back.

“A-a-are you going to hurt me” naruto said scared.

“What are you talking about I’m not going to hurt you I just want to bring you somewhere” the man said picking naruto off the ground.

“Um were is that mister” naruto said.

“Kid call me jiraiya and were going to the hokage’s mansion I need to have a small talk with that old hag” jiraiya said putting naruto on his shoulder (In this Tsunade is already the hokage).

“Ok Jiraiya!!!” naruto said with a giant smile.

It only took jiraiya a couple of minutes to reach the hokage’s mansion.

*Knock Knock*

“Come in” Tsunade said flipping through her papers.

“Hello” jiraiya said opening the door.

“J-J-Jiraiya!!!!” Tsunade said dropping all her papers. “What are you doing he-“

Naruto then stepped out from behind jiraiya.

“Hey is that the you-know-what kid” Tsunade said.

“Don’t worry Tsunade he already knows he’s the container for the kyuubi” jiraiya said picking up naruto again.

“Ok then what do you want” Tsunade said.

“Well I was wondering if I could adopt him as my son” jiraiya said making both naruto and Tsunade shocked.

“Um ok but can I ask why and it better be a good one or I won’t allow it because you’re such a big pervert” Tsunade said calming down.

“Well I promise that I will stop peeping on women until he’s 13 at least and it’s only natural that I take care of him as a son since the forth was his dad and he was my former student” this caused naruto to even be more shocked then before.

“SHUT-UP you idiot you’re not supposed to tell him until he’s hokage remember” tsunade said slamming her fist onto the table.

“Well I decided to tell him know and he should know who his dad is at lest” jiraiya said.

“Well I guess your right, fine you can be his dad. I’ll give you the adoption papers now I guess” Tsunade said handing him the papers.

“Oh and one more thing Tsunade” jiraiya said.

“And what’s that?” Tsunade asked.

“I would like to take naruto out of the village for five years to train him if it’s not too much” Jiraiya said.

“Ok if that’s what you want” Tsunade said taking the papers back from jiraiya “Well mister naruto looks like you have a new dad” Tsunade said smiling at naruto.

“Thank you Tsunade-chan” naruto said with an even bigger smile.

“He’s really cute jiraiya” Tsunade said looking back at jiraiya.

“Yeah he is. Well seeya in five years Tsunade. Come on lets naruto” jiraiya said walking to the door with naruto.

“K sees you guys” Tsunade said waving goodbye.

“See you soon” they both said in unison.

“Alright naruto before we leave let’s get you some new cloths k” jiraiya said walking with naruto.

“OK” naruto said smiling.

After going to all different kind of stories, Naruto finally picked his favorite type of cloths. The cloths were the same in the shippuuden series except smaller and he whore pitch black ninja shoes instead of the blue ones. He also didn’t keep his orange jacket zipped up he whore it unzipped with a black t-shirt under it that had giant konoha symbol that was red. And he didn’t wear the goggles he just let his hair hang. He also bought black konoha ninja gloves that the clothe covered the pinky and ring finger but left the other three fingers out in the open they also had a metal protector on each glove with the konoha symbol on them. Jiraiya also bought him a special kind of kunai that were the exact same kunai as the fourth hokage used (you can see what they look like in the kakashi garden manga). He bought him other ninja supplies like shuriken, paper bombs, and so on.

“Alright naruto now that we have everything we need can we go now” jiraiya asked walking towards the exit of the store.

“Ok I’ve got everything I need we can go” naruto said walking out of the store with all his new cloths and supplies.

Naruto and jiraiya then headed to the gate. When they reached the gates of konoha there was a jonin with white hair.

“Why hello Jiraiya-sama” the man with white hair said.

“Hello kakashi” Jiraiya said back.

Jiraiya then felt a tugging on his lower pants.

“What is it naruto” Jiraiya asked looking at naruto.

“Um who is he” naruto asked pointing at kakashi.

“That guy naruto is your father’s student” jiraiya said.

“WAIT WHAT” Kakashi said with a stunned face.

“Oh right I never told anyone but naruto and tsunade since her already knew” jiraiya said whit a smile “naruto’s dad is the forth hokage or minato for short, but don’t tell any one cause I’m pushing it just telling you.”

“A-Are y-you serious” kakashi said looking at naruto.

“YEP” naruto said with another big smile.

“Well whatever I have a favor to ask of you kakashi” jiraiya said.

“Sure what is it” kakashi asked walking towards the two.

“Well I was wondering if you could help me train naruto for the next five years so he’s ready to fight the you-know-what-group when he gets older” jiraiya said getting serious.

‘The-you-know-what-group?’ naruto wondering in his head

“Are you kidding me that would be great” kakashi said smiling under his mask “But I need to go tell the hokage first”

“That’s fine me and naruto will stay right here” jiraiya said before kakashi vanished in a puff of smoke.

“Hey dad” naruto said.

“What is it naruto” jiraiya asked turning to naruto.
“Well I wanted to know who the-you-know-what-group is” naruto asked wondering

“Well it’s an organization called the akatsuki and there goal is to take the nine-tailed beasts from nine specific people and your one of them naruto” jiraiya said smiling at naruto.

“I am” naruto asked.

“Well actually you have the strongest of the nine” jiraiya said.

“Oh cause I have the nine-tailed fox” naruto said.

“Yes but we’ll get into that during the five years we train cause I sense that kakashi will be here in  a couple of minutes.” Jiraiya said looking in the direction of the hokage mansion.

And jiraiya was right in just a couple of minutes kakashi was back.

“Ok let’s go already” naruto said energetically.

“Alright, alright were going” jiraiya said.

With that the three left to train.

To Be Continued
yes this will be a narusaku story of course. alright now i'm working on three storys at once but i still have writers block for forever narusaku so i'll be working on this and naruto high school, but mostly this one :D.

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great but please dont take the emotion off make naruto call jiraya pervy sage its way better lol